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  • CourageKeeper

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    this is insane and just too great for words <3
    December 19th, 2012 at 01:20am
  • lies.

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    This was, literally, one of the most brilliant things I've ever read. Master Syko told me to read i've got a secret and this, and I'm damn happy that she did.

    Usually I love when people write about Oliver being a nice guy just because of the rumors that suggest otherwise, but this is just magic. I think it's the perfect balance - he knew that it was wrong of him, but he did it anyway.
    Almost like a parallel in most peoples lives with peer pressure and such but on a larger scale.

    I'm officially in love. <3
    November 22nd, 2009 at 07:36am
  • Vanima-Arwen

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    ok..i have to say that this mae my heart beat faster..maybe becuz am not used to reading that kind of stuff...i really like it however... good job!

    btw your note "i need to stop killing people" made me laugh:P
    November 15th, 2009 at 05:18pm
  • mr. owl

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    I saved your's for last. And not only was I completely excited by the fact that it's an Oliver fic, but it's also a spin off of your Chelsea Smile story. God, you are wonderful.

    Wow. Again, you've managed to shock me. He killed yet another girl. I love the way they don't say a word to each other unless the girl realizes Oliver's intentions. I think my favorite part of this was when he curled up next to her and actually fell asleep with her.

    This is so creepy; almost as creepy as your other one. And it was just incredible. :D You portrayed the quote perfectly.

    Although I do disagree. You should not quit killing people.

    You're good at it. :D
    November 15th, 2009 at 05:14am
  • mischeifmanaged.

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    Wow,i really like this.
    Well done. (:
    November 14th, 2009 at 11:48am
  • miss erin

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    This was utterly creepy. i was like wtf?!? but your writing makes it seem fine, like an everyday thing for Oli. but man i was hoping for an awesome sex scene. im like YES! they are soo going to do it!! but im glad this was kind of a sequel. it was amazinnnnggg!!
    November 13th, 2009 at 07:33am