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  • celestial_royalty

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    OOOOOOH I love it!!! The prequel had lots of errors in it, but I'm assuming that's cuz it's old, and this one only had minor ones but oh well. In chapter 1 and 13, Brian and Devlin (I think!) have dead links to their photos. I'm sorry if that's wrong! I only remember for sure that there were two malfunctions. Anyway, I loved the humor, as always- you're seriously my role model when it comes to sarcasm, I swear! I love it, I'm more of a smartass because of you <3 <3 <3

    These are my absolute favorite quotes from the story that I'm gunna keep forever and ever~~~

    Obviously the boy knew Nathan, but how, was he his brother?Cousin? Friend?Gay Partner?...I'm hoping it's one of the first three.(brother, cousin or friend.btw)

    Muse blasted through my radio. It was the only way to really feel close to Nathan. It was one of the common things we had.
    Being with my friends didn't help me forget about Nathan. I couldn't help it; he's always on my mind day and night. I hate myself so much for still loving him. But it's so hard to turn this pure and beautiful feeling into something like hatred.

    Linda had me pinned to the floor.

    "Repeat!" She barked in demand.

    I struggled to get out of my pinned position but it was futile.

    She stayed quite before saying. “What?”

    “Linda, I was a professional criminal and you’re a bad liar.”

    I chuckled. “But she was totally undressing you with her eyes.”

    “That she was, like you used to.” He smirked.

    I blushed. “Yeah… I still do… when you’re not looking.”

    My dad started ranting about how the FBI screwed up and he was going to sue the government. I zoned out.

    ------OH! and OH MY GOSH I love the alternative story better than the original squeal. I mean sequel. Hehe. It was kind of confusing with the original sequel how Mel suddenly fell for, and screwed, Devlin like there was some magical chemistry that linked them together. And then...yeah, it was nice that Peter made a good reform, and Cesar. YAYYYYYY~
    February 7th, 2011 at 07:03am
  • Dorkazoid.

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    who's the guy portraying as nathan? ;)
    July 31st, 2010 at 05:46am
  • so it goes

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    Aww, that was so cute!
    I loved it, ever since I read it on quizilla.
    You did an amazing job with this story
    I loved the ending, I thought something was going to happen, but luckily, nothing did.
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    February 9th, 2010 at 03:52am
  • Hello I love you

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    Amazing (:
    I've been with this one since it started on quizilla, and i love it.
    Well done.
    Fiction to be proud of (:
    February 3rd, 2010 at 09:37pm
  • roxy_jenn

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    hey!
    i love this story.
    you should write another sequel to it :)
    keep up with the awesome writing :D
    February 3rd, 2010 at 12:55pm
  • thedarksnowqueen

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    ohmyGod, im in tears. Literally.
    That was so beautiful.
    And it was smart to put the ending in Third POV and having flashbacks. I loved it so much. It was one of the best stories I've ever read in my life.
    Congrats, Melinda and Nathan. Destiny's been waiting.
    February 3rd, 2010 at 02:22am
  • xxSkyeBizarrexx

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    eeeeeep!!!! i loveeeee this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it's amazing!!!!!!!!!!
    February 3rd, 2010 at 01:30am
  • so it goes

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    Yay! He's not going through with the plan
    I was a little surprised
    But I'm happy he's not :D
    I hope you update soon
    January 20th, 2010 at 03:40am
  • thedarksnowqueen

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    damn, she's had a very fucked up life.
    but whoa...i did NOT see that coming from Devlin. its shocking :O
    haha, lol.
    update soon?
    January 19th, 2010 at 12:50pm
  • for i have syn

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    I wish you can write this story as long as you can. But it does have to end. I love this story so much. I'll cry if you end it soon.
    January 18th, 2010 at 11:45pm
  • xxSkyeBizarrexx

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    it's amazing!!!!! i love it so much!!!!!!!
    update soon??? poravor???)sp?, i took spanish for my wheel but i'm not sure i spelt it right...)
    January 9th, 2010 at 09:58pm
  • XxOreo_ninjaxX

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    oh my god oh my god update SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    January 9th, 2010 at 02:14am
  • XxOreo_ninjaxX

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    luv it continue its really appreciated
    January 3rd, 2010 at 10:11am
  • DeDepearberrie

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    I just got finished reading ch.46 on quizilla lmao
    December 22nd, 2009 at 09:43pm
  • starviewer

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    omg! peter is coming back.
    December 15th, 2009 at 08:49pm
  • xxSkyeBizarrexx

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    PWEASE PWETTY PWEASE UPDATE
    December 13th, 2009 at 10:26pm
  • so it goes

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    I got all caught up again
    You update this on mibba more : ]
    It's reallllllly good!!!
    More soon?
    It's amazing
    December 9th, 2009 at 05:10am
  • starviewer

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    oh wow oh wow i got back just in time.
    December 9th, 2009 at 02:08am
  • starviewer

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    man i miss so manny chappters i dont know why im not gething the emails but im up to date now.
    December 8th, 2009 at 04:39pm
  • xxSkyeBizarrexx

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    hii umm, u might remember me i'm whitch123 from quizilla :) i can't go on quizilla anymore :( so, thank you soooo much for puting this and "kidnapped by my father's enemy's hot son did i just say hot?!" up on here i love this story soooo much!!!!!!!!!!!!!! any wayz please wright more!!! it's the best story on here and quizilla combined(sp?) so um er byes!
    December 2nd, 2009 at 02:44am
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