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  • silentaffections

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    Wow, this is really cute. I hope you keep it up, but I hope you take more time to read over your work; you won't need to change much but it'll help keep your grammatical errors at bay, you know? I like where you're bringing this story and your fans seem to like your bit about Jasper, too (I'm only on the 1st chapter). Keep it up!
    June 10th, 2013 at 05:28pm
  • nicolecullen

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    I really like this! please continue!
    January 27th, 2011 at 11:48pm
  • slowburnbaby

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    Oh my goodness!
    I love the new dark edge this has!
    and how jaspers fantasy changes.there may be hope he isn't unconrtollable!
    December 27th, 2010 at 05:23am
  • trinkeyk

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    Mhm this is incredibly good.Continue Please!(:
    April 3rd, 2010 at 02:13am
  • slowburnbaby

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    I lov ethis! So glad you have finally updated!
    March 23rd, 2010 at 09:53pm
  • slowburnbaby

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    pooooor jasper! his thirst is going to make him eat danny all up cause he loves her scent so! XD(totally stole it from where the wild things are)
    November 28th, 2009 at 04:58am
  • devie44

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    Love it :o
    November 7th, 2009 at 10:07pm
  • slowburnbaby

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    I love this chapter, I like jaspers emotions, frighteningly ingtruiging!
    November 7th, 2009 at 03:37am
  • FinchellLovesA7X

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    Love it can`t wait for more
    November 6th, 2009 at 01:25am
  • Vorazlov28

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    Yay! First chapter. It's good. I like it. :D
    Jaspers so cute. I can't wait to see what happens.
    And no Forks. HA!
    November 5th, 2009 at 07:45pm
  • JackieWuvsYooh

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    i love it!
    it's so cute and well thought out!
    November 4th, 2009 at 01:58am
  • JackieWuvsYooh

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    It was really cute :D
    it also had a bunch of twilight about it in it.
    i love twilight. :)
    November 4th, 2009 at 12:14am
  • slowburnbaby

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    I love this so far, I like the desrcitions, and how it isn't all EDWARD! =] *thumbs up*
    November 3rd, 2009 at 04:10am
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