My modern day Romeo happens to be a vampire. Who knew? - Comments

Wow, this is really cute. I hope you keep it up, but I hope you take more time to read over your work; you won't need to change much but it'll help keep your grammatical errors at bay, you know? I like where you're bringing this story and your fans seem to like your bit about Jasper, too (I'm only on the 1st chapter). Keep it up!

I really like this! please continue!

Oh my goodness!
I love the new dark edge this has!
and how jaspers fantasy changes.there may be hope he isn't unconrtollable!

Mhm this is incredibly good.Continue Please!(:

I lov ethis! So glad you have finally updated!

pooooor jasper! his thirst is going to make him eat danny all up cause he loves her scent so! XD(totally stole it from where the wild things are)

Love it :o

I love this chapter, I like jaspers emotions, frighteningly ingtruiging!

Love it can`t wait for more

Yay! First chapter. It's good. I like it. :D
Jaspers so cute. I can't wait to see what happens.
And no Forks. HA!

i love it!
it's so cute and well thought out!

It was really cute :D
it also had a bunch of twilight about it in it.
i love twilight. :)

I love this so far, I like the desrcitions, and how it isn't all EDWARD! =] *thumbs up*