Arianna Selenasdaughter - Comments

VoicesInMyMind (100)

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Will you ever update this? Please do!!

January 15th, 2012 at 11:39pm

celestial_royalty (100)

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This is good! The language is much better than the others I've seen so far, not that there are many on here to begin with. Thank goodness though, that you aren't including "fuck" "guy" and "ass" in every other sentence. Thank goodness.

The only thing, though, is that there is simply no way Galbatorix couldn't break into her mind. Have you read Inheritance? There's simply no way.

December 13th, 2011 at 05:48am

VoicesInMyMind (100)

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Please, please, please update soon. I love this story!! And I love Eragon!

July 22nd, 2010 at 02:08am

i_wanna_fly14 (100)

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plz update soon :D i luv the story:D :D

February 16th, 2010 at 08:58am

frozenXxXmemories (100)

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Wow, unlike a lot of stories I have read on the net, this one has substance. I actually want to read more, and you didn't lose me at the first paragraph lol

Ccan't wait to read more. Thanks for an awsome read :)

November 3rd, 2009 at 02:40pm