Behind The Searcher - Comments

Whohoo! I love this...O_O
You write awesomely(if thats even a word)
GAH!! Yeah, I love it.

Hmmmm... Okay, you have my stumped. So kutos to you. Not totally in the dark, but I definity don't have a clue at all that you have planned.
I'm going to have start myself a stoy in first person, maybe that will help... Eh, it's good to be back.

Hmmmm... Okay, you have my stumped. So kutos to you. Not totally in the dark, but I definity don't have a clue at all that you have planned.
I'm going to have start myself a stoy in first person, maybe that will help... Eh, it's good to be back.

You're an amazing writer....has anyone ever told you that? I could see this in a magazine!

Brilliant stuff, m'dear, but I have an error to report!

The word "anyways" is wrong. The word 'anyway' does not have an 's' on the end of it. -points finger- IMPROPER GRAMMAR, SILLY MORTAL!!!!

^.^ :D

Um, I'd point out where it's at, but I don't remember. It's in some dialogue, though, somewhere in the middle. :)

Like I said, though, I love the story!

E.

Buddy, I am so sorry it took so long for me to get around to reading this... I should have done it a lot sooner. Anyway, great again. My brain is still a bit numb from boarding yesterday so I can't come up with any great comments, but I liked it! Hehe....

Ooooo it's getting even more interesting.
More. I demand it! XD

I really love this story.
Its a refreshing change from the bullshit love stories with celebrities and happy endings most of Mibba is full of.
I write stuff like that.
What I wouldn't give to trade minds with your for 24 hours.

Jeez, I was positive I had subbed. D:
Nonetheless, I loved this. And I will make sure I'm subbed. >.<
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You know your story totally beats my feeble attempt at something a bit twisted.... Eh, I keep feeling like I go a bit to far... anyway, you have an amazing balance of personality, reality, and humor that is just awesome. Like usual, this last chapter was Ah-mazing. Keep it up!

Oh my gasp. How did I not find this earlier?
IT'S AMAZING! Your writing style owns. And I love the paranormal/fantasy stuffs :D
Definitely can't wait for more.

This looks awesome! But...my eyesight sucks. Could you maybe make the font size a little bigger? Keep the font, just make it bigger. Please? I'd love to read it!

E.

Oh yess together all three of us can take over the world :]

I like the new chapter. And you gotta keep the quote! I luv it. And now I'm not alone, how exciting!

I must admit, I am usually the reader that goes for those cliche love stories. But, I must quote, "'too gruesome' is hard to achieve unless you get cheesy." I can have quite a twisted mind! Haha I will just shut up so that I don't scare anyone, but I want to express my love for this story, 'cause it's freaking amazing <3.

I'm guessing I'm the least ghostly of the subscribers... Boo! Haha, anyway, nice as usual. Not really much happened, but I'll take whatever I can get. In the lonely world of non-love-story writing, almost everything is gold. Of course, yours is a bit on the higher end of the gold spectrum. Haha. Still awaiting the next chapter!

As Always, I'm loving the newest edition. "So much for morals..." Haha! I cannot get over your awesome voice. I love it! If only I wrote chapters as fast as you seem too, then I would be getting somewhere. Haha! As always, I shall be happily anticipating the next chapter.

Layzi Crayzi Kayzi is I! haha. I can't wait to see how this new part ends up. Origins are alway things I like to experiment with. What situations and what histories would make a charrie who they are, and I can't wait to read this one. Keep it up! And always glad to be an encouragement. I know how discouraging it is not to get any readers or comments.

You make my life. I was afraid that this would never be found or read by anyone, and hours after I post it, comments. And you don't sound insane at all to me=)

I'm addicted. And It's only like chapter two. First, in my book, "too gruesome" is hard to achieve unless you get cheesy. A good torture scene, love it! I know, that sounds totally insane "Why isn't Kayzi locked up!" but hey. I'm fascinated with the narrator, his thirst for pain. One of my favorite aspects to a story is helplessness, and he creates that. Awesome work, and I love the style. Now if I could just get some of my stories to sound like that I'd be rolling! Anyway, I absolutely adore the idea, and what I've read even more, keep going!