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  • honeyjoons

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    aww, that was so sad but so nice at the same time! =) <3
    May 13th, 2010 at 12:27am
  • d0wn the rabbit hole

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    aww poor ali :'(
    alex was mean in this!
    it was really good though! :)
    May 8th, 2010 at 05:35pm
  • swell

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    I really liked this, I thought the idea you had was really thought out, and it was displayed creatively in your writing. The song also went really well with the one shot; I enjoyed that too.

    For criticism, you didn't use capitals at the start of your dialogue. Other than that, you did a really good job.
    Rating: 8.
    December 15th, 2009 at 04:58am
  • running from lions

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    aww good but sad
    jasey rae's one of my all-time-fav songs =)
    November 22nd, 2009 at 11:19pm
  • BrunetteGherl

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    -does stupid happy dance- UGHH I DIDNT THINK IT COULD GET BETTER. I like the changes, and the music videos in the summaryyyy<33 xDDDD
    November 4th, 2009 at 04:55am
  • BrunetteGherl

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    OH MY GOSH!!! TOTALLY CREATIVEEE!!! I LOVEEE ITT, I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT, I soooo didnt expect that, but in a GOOD WAY! OhEmGee. AMAZING. I cant wait until everyone gets their entries in so I can finally judge, but I love this storrryy
    November 3rd, 2009 at 06:10am
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