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  • Aria T'Loak

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    Guess who’s back to stalking you! :D *mumbles* It’s meeeee~! Sorry, I’m not quite sure what came over me. O.o Anyway. First I have to say that this is right up my alley. Killing, dark topic, and you’re already describing him with a twisted smile – le sigh. I adore it already. I have no idea if this is some sort of fanfic or whatnot, but it sort of reminds me vaguely of…something…I can’t be sure what, though. Of course, you had to go and make me feel bad for him when you wrote about him thinking of the girl he thought he loved who he KILLED. Fjaskl;fdjz gah. I’m sorry, but I don’t understand the end AT ALL. A blade came up with his vomit…and he vomited because of the blade…I am so missing something. lmfao

    Don’t worry, I still thoroughly enjoyed it! <3 Haven
    August 21st, 2011 at 08:57am
  • medusacascade

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    Officially declared awesome.
    June 19th, 2010 at 06:05am
  • Ricky Ricardo

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    Excellent job. :D
    February 5th, 2010 at 09:17am
  • jasonsudekis

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    I've never heard of this guy before. Is he from a movie or in a band?

    Either way, great fic. It was so detailed for such a short story, and it was really fun to read. The main character seemed very deep, also. Even though you didn't make him up, you really gave him depth.

    I'll have results up in a couple of days. Thanks for entering!
    November 4th, 2009 at 01:21am
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