Holy fucking moley. How the hell did i not stumble across this and the prequel earlier? Cause im a real fucking idiot thats why. Lookie lookie at what ive been missing ou on. I seriously feed bad for myself. Mannn. There is so many good things to say about this story, and of course the prequel. Well. The first thing i wanna say is that your a great writer and you got me immedietly hooked onto your first story. I dunno somthing about me and being kidnapped by vampires is kinda kinky dont ya think, hahaha. Welllls just commented to say that your doing wonderfully, and he characters are truly beautiful. Ive gotten so attached to them. Hahah. Wow, im such a wuss.
I just recently got the urge to keep writing one of my less active stories too, and I'm glad the same happened to you! I was just wondering about this story the other day...
Well anyways, >.> I sort of wish she wasn't with Oliver, for some reason. Just seems like Andy cares about her more than he does at this point.
I'm glad you finally updated! I know how it feels to lose inspiration for a story and I'd help if I could, but vampires just aren't something I'm really...good at writing about. :/
I know you'll figure it out. If not, start a new Oliver Sykes story!
I love the story so far. But since you may need some ideas maybe you could possibly make it that his dad is like.. maybe a part of the.. people who are after them. Maybe? (i don't remeber they group name or whatever you want to call it besides 'group'.)