Let Me Be Your Wings - Comments

Awww, yay, an update :) :D :P Okay, he either kisses her.....or randomly starts tickling her b/c she is totally Patrick 's........(I prefer the latter *wink wink*) hehe......Loved the update :) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P

I seriously freakin' love this story. I love the tender moments between Patrick and Kaycie, even though I am completely clueless when it comes to the sports references in this story; well written!

Hmm...let's see...I think that either they'll kiss or Sharp'll burst into the room. MORE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The whole "i love you" thing was a little bland, it needed a little more tension to it, and it was kind of slow, but it was a filler chapter, so that's expected. It did seem a little rushed, but still, it was good and you had a lot of awesome writing in there, so keep up the good work and i really look forward to your next update

Loved the update. More soon, please!

LOVE IT. I can't wait for more ;D

I love this story. They just need to get together already. xD haha ;) :) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P Haha love it :) :D :P

OK, when are they gonna admit that they like each other? MORE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Go Chicago...I guess...

So, I’ve finally caught up with this. So, let me comment on the last two chapters!

"I'll hold your hand." She better not have said no to that offer! Though, I do feel bad for her not liking to fly, now that because of her job, she’s going to have to fly a lot. But, Sharpie will be there for her, so it won’t be that bad!

"I'm right here," whispered Patrick in my ear, "Nothings going to happen." The plane started to pick up speed, my grip getting tighter, "It's going to be okay." Freaking adorable.

A pair of arms came and pulled me down to my right. Opening my eyes, I found myself on the slightly angled chest of Patrick Sharp. Okay, I want to find myself in her position!

And, Duncs hitting on her. Please, she’s so Sharpie’s girl =) But, I have to say, picturing Duncan dancing it a great mental picture! But, I think it’s so cute to picture Patrick and her waltzing!

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And, now Steeger hitting on her? As much as I love him, I’m still rooting for her and Sharpie, so he needs to back off =)

Howard actually gave her his blessing? Wow, I was not expecting that one. Though, something tells me that if (when) she starts going with a player, he’s not going to be the happiest person (until he sees that they really like each other).

"Miserably Single. Adam, Kris, Duncan, and I are going out and Adam's girlfriend is bringing her friends, and they'll be all over us...."Awww…But now she’s going to be Sharpie’s date? Lucky, lucky girl!

I didn't want Patrick to say yes, so I grabbed my drink and took a long sip, finishing it. Standing up, I grabbed his hand and pulled him to the dance floor. Atta girl, take charge!

They’re totally describing each other, though neither one of them will realize it for a while!

:) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P Hehe loved the update :) :D :P Does she have blue eyes? Because I don't think she mentioned her NOT having them.....hmmm because it could be her, she just doesn't think of herself that way ;) haha
Loved it :) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P

I LOVE the song Jump In The Line!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BEETLEJUICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MORE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is a really cute story :) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P Can't wait for more :) :D :P

I LOVE ZOOT SUIT RIOT!!!!! I love swing dancing, dancing in general really. This was a great chapter! They were so cute on the plane. :D

I loveeeeeeee this story,
Sharpie is such a sexy beast ;)

Update soon!

This is awesome, i cant wait to read the next one!

So, I love this already. I mean, it’s about Patrick Sharp, afterall. How could I not love it?

I loved her little test by Howard about the boys and their names/numbers. I’m glad she passed that with flying colors, haha!

It was times like these I wish we still had Khabibulin and not Huet. It’s like you can read my mind!

"Oh...." I drew in air between my teeth, "Shoot Adam.... I'm sorry. I only date hot sweaty guys with muscles," I can just imagine Adam’s reaction to that. It would be hilarious!

A moment of silence came before I said, "What happened last night?"
"You got drunk and we had hot sloppy sex in front of everyone." Okay, hot sex with Sharpie, that is an image that I never want to leave my head =)

"I have an awesome shot of Fraser punching one of the Blues square in the jaw!" That would be an awesome shot, haha!

Awww, he brought her lunch! That’s so sweet!

Seriously, I love this so far. And, obviously there’s an attraction between Kaycie and Sharpie, and I can’t wait for them to act on those feelings. But, I am wondering what’s going to happen with Kaycie’s job and Howard.

So, you need to update really, really soon =)

Good so far. Sports aren't my thing, so...it's mostly based on what I think of non-sports happenings. Although, the thing with Fraser punching the Blues guy was entertaining. There's a picture I'd love to see! I did go through a wrestling phase for a time, but I mostly just liked the Undertaker.
I'd love to see more soon. <3