Wow. This was really amazing. You did a perfect job making the guilt really stand out. At first I was like, oh she's guilty 'cause she cheated on him... But no. She's guilty 'cause she basically killed him.
This was so good! I could envision everything perfectly. I liked the twist where you made him (Whoever he is) kill himself, instead of killing her. That made me stop reading for a minute, and cover my mouth in a shocked state. :3
Very well written. You should feel very proud about your entry for that contest. :)
Amazing.