Thankies Nicole! :tehe:
April 11th, 2008 at 03:27am
Great update, Rachel!
Can't wait for more.
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April 5th, 2008 at 04:26pm
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\\- nicole; sock ownage.:
- Great update, Rach. :] You're a great writer!
Jacob reminds me of Matt Rubano from Taking Back Sunday...Look him up. He's a cutieee. ;D
lol thanks!
October 10th, 2007 at 04:40am -
Great update, Rach. :] You're a great writer!
Jacob reminds me of Matt Rubano from Taking Back Sunday...Look him up. He's a cutieee. ;DOctober 10th, 2007 at 01:52am -
Wow Rachel, your story is fantastic!
TU SABES! :]September 26th, 2007 at 10:34pm -
Wow, I absolutely love this! It's humorous, and Gilda almost reminds me of how I was just a few years ago (not daydreaming about dating my teachers, though. My teachers were OLLDDD). And I love the way you compare the cliques in schools with ice cream flavors. I actually never thought of it that way before.
Though, a word of advice would be to watch the way you phrase certain things. Sometimes, particularly in chapter 1, some sentences seemed a little awkward. Other than that, make sure you proofread. A few typos here and there. Great work!September 23rd, 2007 at 07:28am -
Yay this is my first story! PLease don't be harsh. Unless its helping... :shock: September 22nd, 2007 at 10:27am
