I thought it was a good soild chapter charecter building and stuff. I hope your day gets better! If it makes you feel any better, I had a rough day too. But no worries, I hope to be good as new soon:)
it made me laugh about how you named Luke and Dana. haha. very creative :] i think acelynn is my favorite name ever!! (with rosemary...)
I love tuck. he makes me laugh, but he's a cool guy. i wish he were real (with luke, of course)
i quit my life as a ballerina in december after some drama and stress with the seniors around nutcracker time. my instructor was heidi, from germany :D. so anyways, i know all about the stress of the ballet world.
Wow. I have SO much homework this weekend but because I remembered you I read this again. All of it. And I'm still in shock about the b-day kiss thing. o____o I LOVE it!! It's so freakin' awesome and aahhh. I love Luke type people. They're like my knight in shining armour. But I also like the Tuck type guys. Seriously, I dunno why, but yeah. <3 OMG!!! Now the story is KABOOM! I really like how it's all turning out. The fighting, the problems, the random kiss. *sigh* Totally my fave type of story. All that's missing is the black cat. =) Um, yeah. Please excuse my rambling. It's... 1:40am and I'm tired. I'm going to watch some anime n go to bed. I'll be checking every couple of days 2 c if you update, kay? Kay. I'm... yeah. Nighty Ny and c ya soon!
Woah, well good for her for slapping Tuck! And Tuck kissed her?! Future repricussions? Well more please!
Oh, I was wondering if you would do me the honor of criticing my story "Carefully Guarded". I won't be offended if you don't(school and all that) but I would apprecate it if you do.