I read this in the past; I could've sworn I left a comment. But I saw your comment on Pax, and I was like, "Must reciprocate!" So, I clicked on this story, and here I am.
Anyway, this story is amazing. You're an awesome writer. I really loved how you described everything, especially Adele. (:
Aww! This was very very well written. I love when an author puts nice description into things. It makes the reader be able to imagine the things that are going on in someones stories. Also, I think it was very professionally written. Good details, grammar, punctuation. Everything you need to write fantastic stories. Which you have done. Fantastic job!
such a cute shot-set, amazing description
you're incredibly talented, dear (:
would you ever consider making this a story? I think you could definitely go places with it