Black Keys - Comments

Oh my lord.
I liked this, Alice.
See, I was like. It's Christofer Drew, he's
But he has a problem, she just can't take him back. We think the same, my love.
Sad, but not so sad, endings.

One-shot for One-shot

I really enjoyed reading; the feeling you poured into the story work very well with the plot line and it seems realistic the way the conflict was resolved.

The characters are very vivid also, and including the song in was quite an interesting thing to do; it saved me time of searching for the lyrics hehe.

Really nicely done.

This is really good.
You picked a really good story line to go with the song, it really worked out.
When I got to the end I was saying to myself, 'Please please please please get back together.' It made me sad :(

THAT is emotional.

At the end, my expression was "omg you can't end there. WHAT?!" Making me sad, therefore emotional ;)

I just reread this and it's just.... wow. the pictures are great, adding the lyrics was great.

the story itself? amazing. kinda gives me hope they can get back together!! :D

this was just in itself, miraculous, seriously. you did a fantasic job in every aspect! your writing style is wonderful!!