Please don't drop the story, it is freaking amazing! I love how you made the characters and setting so detailed. A majority of writers on here are only about quantity, not quality. I applaud you, though I'm not sure I spelled that right... oh well. XP
Have you met me yet Mollie? I'm Sara right, I can't find myself if you have met me, and If you havent met me then meet me already because I AM AWSOME, along with this book of course. Sooo, meet me because the readers have not lived until they meet Sadie Jayne Ameilia Gill, who wouldn;t want to meet me?! Ok, so thats it, I don't like it, I fricking adore it! give me back WIlliam, I need him for a day, love ya, love this, love Neko, love Cats, bye Sadie xxxxxx
The last chapter made me laugh, lol, Not a vampire, i WISH my boyfriend was a vampire, he could have my blood anytime, as long as I get enternal beauty and youth! small price to pay, reminded me of my mother so bad, keep it up honey! LOVE YA Sadie xxxx
Just read chapter 8. and I'm sorry to say... (really really sorry) don't fall out with me but I freaking LOVED it! Ok it might just be me but is that cat Neko? lol well anyway I think it is and thats good enough for me. Only suggestion and I say it cause i care, chapter 8 mentions the word swore alot, it got repeatative. Other then that fantasic, keep writing. I still think vampires are awsome but Neko's are on the same level as werewolfs for me (2nd) so thats a good place. Love you! Sadie xxx
Way to kick ass Mollie! Show the dead people it's all about your Nekos, and i have to add Angels cause...yeah, i love them, Don't give up, i pimped you out in the authors note in my story and Neko's have amazing potential, them dead people just need to stay dead so people can read things with a tad more originality. Keep writing and LONG LIVE NEKOS!!!!
Mollie I love your story, I honestly do. You have some real potential, all I say is slow it down, detail it out and make it slow and meaningful. I subscribed, I adore it, you are my mon amour (lol) I shall see you at school, and by the way.... Mr McAwful>? That is mine! I made it up, but I don't mind you using it hon xx Sadie
Should I drop this story? I've been writing it in my big notepad on the way to school for the past two or three months now. And I've had one subscriber. No-one likes nekos! It's so sad. All the stories on this god damn site are all about bloody vampires! I couldn't careless about blood suckers! They are wretched, fucked in the head corpses who pick on innocent women for pete's sake! I like the whole idea of vamps but now they're not magical anymore. Suddenly every hot guy on the planet has vampire teeth. Now every fit tanned guy in America has suddenly turned into a werewolf. I'm sick of all those wolf-boys and blood suckers infiltrating Mibba. I'd rather have a fit boy who is warm and has a beating heart than dead guy snogging me. It makes sense. Sorry guys but vamps are lame. True fact.