The voice in her head does make me laugh a bit, so you're good there. Haha. And I'm really curious as to what her wings look like since we can't really see them. I know that this may sound stupid, but for whatever reason I picture them blue. Haha. You're doing a great job and I'm lookin' forward to more!
I'm loving this, Kat! I'm so sorry that I haven't commented, but it said that my subscription got deactivated. Needless to say, I was PISSED. But you're doing a wonderful job with the story, just as you have been. I loved how we found out that Beth was the last true fallen... It was a shocker, but I love it. :)
chp 5 was a surprise and sort of not about Beth being the last true fallen and all. I liked the argument with Saul. honestly, he can go live in a hole.
I hate Saul. He is so stupid and mean and pathetic.... And I still love his stupid character!! : ( I also hate the bitchy little whore he is marrying.. *Makes angry face!*
Great writing, I liked it until Saul and Hoe-Face showed up!
Okay, this chapter was amazing... and I can honestly say it made me cry. = ( I can't stand Saul being like that to her!! especially when they should be together!!
Botis! Yay! I thought the cloaked man was Saul, to be honest. But I'm so glad that it's Botis, and I'm really happy that Beth can stay with Aaliyah. I wonder how she's going to handle being a Master, though...I'm sure she'll figure something out. I loved it! :)