well, dont u think that comments would be expected so that she would know if her update's good, or if there are any thoughts about what to change? i mean she is writing this for us, so the least we could do is give her a comment. (@Angie.)
anyways, great update, i like how she finally realized that the party scene wasnt all that good. and how her old friends were bad influences and what not. i cant believe that she changed her hair tho! :( she's beautiful just the way she is.
JAKE CAME BACK! ^^ yay! lol, just had to say that! ^^ but i mean really, >< finally. >< lol
i really liked this one, i also like her outfit too! lolz, i favorited it on polyvore
All I have to say is that it really makes me mad when authors hold updates hostage for comments. It's ridiculous, comments should be deserved, not expected. Yes your story is good, but asking for ten comments for another chapter? Which in turn just boosts your stars and etc? That deteriates the story. *end rant* I'm sorry but I really needed to get that off my chest.