The contest is finally over. Congratulations you got 93 points out of hundred.
Composition: 20 points. Originality:10 points Grammar, spelling: 20 points Description:43 points, sorry I just read CandyGuns entry and the girl had to get maximum on description, because it was brilliant.
Who cares about the song, when you have such cute ending. No grammar errors, well written and nice composition. I liked the idea with the clothes. That he was sorting them out and then had a brake down. And the hot chocolate made me smile. But please push the enter button, because someone will report you. My friend got reported over the stupid thing.
Composition: 20 points.
Originality:10 points
Grammar, spelling: 20 points
Description:43 points, sorry I just read CandyGuns entry and the girl had to get maximum on description, because it was brilliant.
Now you can go and see the results here .