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  • mama-val

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    it was a good chapter but sort of confusing, because us readers had to figure out who's point of view it was in. So it would help a lot if you wrote _________'s p.o.v. and put whoever it is in the blank, because I was getting really confused at the begining and i'm still confused as to who was talking when. But it's a good story so please update soon.
    March 25th, 2010 at 05:54am
  • Bones;

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    Just read it all, love it. Can't wait for the next chapter!
    March 17th, 2010 at 03:33am
  • My Chemical Tardis

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    I went crazy from waiting and now I'll have to wait again for the next chapter :(
    keep on writing, I love it n.n
    March 14th, 2010 at 04:56pm
  • mama-val

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    OMJ!! it's so good!! please up date soon! I love it! <3 :-P
    March 14th, 2010 at 07:27am
  • My Chemical Tardis

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    Awhh! Alex and Sonea would look so cute together! Update soon n.n
    March 9th, 2010 at 09:35pm
  • Hope.

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    OMG i lovee you'r story, write more :)
    please! :) i will give you a cyber cookie :)
    March 8th, 2010 at 07:09pm
  • My Chemical Tardis

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    oh my god, i'm in love with your story <3
    :'D
    March 1st, 2010 at 05:59pm
  • Reckless

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    Ohhh, write more.
    I love :)
    February 26th, 2010 at 07:15pm
  • AZNGRL

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    i like it so what happens next
    February 26th, 2010 at 02:22am
  • thejaxsterrr

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    I subscribed but haven't read anything yet because I have no time. I'll read it when I get home. (: It seems like a good story as far as the summary goes.
    February 25th, 2010 at 08:29pm
  • AZNGRL

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    so far i'm liking it
    February 25th, 2010 at 08:16pm
  • ximone

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    I like your story, but can I leave you a little friendly tip? : Make your sentences longer and put more details. It'll be great. :D Hope to read more!
    February 11th, 2010 at 11:29pm
  • Alice!

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    yay!
    January 8th, 2010 at 01:52pm
  • Alice!

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    Yaaay I like this update!
    Please update sooooon? :D
    December 22nd, 2009 at 08:16pm
  • Alice!

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    Hi, I just read this story after seeing it updated on the homepage, and I just want to say I really like it! I want to know what happens next! Please update soon?
    December 2nd, 2009 at 09:09pm
  • Little Monster

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    It's good so far.
    Looking forward to your next update (:
    November 26th, 2009 at 05:42pm
  • Kiksebof

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    Hi :D it's nice to know you like it ^^
    I'll try my best to update very soon :)
    November 8th, 2009 at 11:37pm
  • Much.Betterr

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    I love it!!! Please please update soon :) :)
    November 8th, 2009 at 11:23pm
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