First chapters reaction- AWWWWWWW! Second Chapters Reaction- Oh noes! You is evil! Third chapters reaction- OMG I take back what I siad before you it not evil! You is amazing! :3 tehe awesome story I bet you'll win.
this is so cute! There's only one thing - "Alex, I...I really need to talk to you," he said and I turned to him and saw just how desperate he was. I think you meant to write 'Luke' instead of 'Alex'.
Second Chapters Reaction- Oh noes! You is evil!
Third chapters reaction- OMG I take back what I siad before you it not evil! You is amazing!
:3 tehe awesome story I bet you'll win.