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  • AmberFlysHigh;

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    you should update
    May 27th, 2011 at 10:10pm
  • AmberFlysHigh;

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    I hope that there is an update soon:)<3333
    October 23rd, 2010 at 02:58am
  • Mrs. McPsycho

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    haha i lush this keep writing plz it makes me smile down with the hoes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! haha keep up the good work
    :O)
    July 1st, 2010 at 01:27am
  • paintedbynumbers

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    I'm loving this story so far... can't wait for an update
    May 18th, 2010 at 11:01am
  • stands-in-the-rain

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    Oh I'm sensing some drama lol
    Get rid of da bitch!
    I'm glad she has Blake lol she needed a girl friend
    Can't wait to read more :D
    April 30th, 2010 at 03:05am
  • Dame Chance

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    :)
    Muwahahahahaaaaa!
    STEAL RONNIE FROM THAT CHEATING WHORE!
    Ahemm, anywhoooo.
    I like Blake. :)
    April 30th, 2010 at 02:10am
  • RonnieRadke

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    Love this so far.
    More please?
    xx
    March 22nd, 2010 at 03:30am
  • stained glass eyes

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    i like the story so far.

    there's just one thing. you said 'robert and i' when it would actually be 'robert and me.' i know there's that stupid rule where it says that you're supposed to use i but in some contexts you're supposed to use me. to figure out which one to use you would take out the first person of the sentence. so when your sentence says 'You’ll be with Robert and I' you would think of it without robert's name in it. 'you'll be with i' that doesn't make sense so it would be 'you'll be with me.'

    sorry for that... english lesson xD but it was bugging me.
    March 16th, 2010 at 05:41am
  • Dame Chance

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    grah!! skank-alert!! avery should not be civil. she should be rude and mean and make the slut cry :D
    March 14th, 2010 at 04:39pm
  • stands-in-the-rain

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    Yay an update :)
    Keep it up! I love it!
    I hate that dumb bimbo! People like that piss me off! xD
    He should dump her skank-ass. LOL Awesome, lol art class sounds like fun xD
    March 14th, 2010 at 09:48am
  • stands-in-the-rain

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    I really love this story so far!
    Very fun to read!
    You should update soon!
    March 14th, 2010 at 06:24am
  • AmberFlysHigh;

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    Are yew gonna update this?
    February 25th, 2010 at 01:06pm
  • AmberFlysHigh;

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    UPDATES?!?!?!
    January 21st, 2010 at 02:48am
  • Dame Chance

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    i second soochie's comment. i like the story. its nice to read one were theyre not famous yet :P
    December 29th, 2009 at 11:25am
  • soochie

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    I vote Ronnie trashes the hoe... but it can never be just that simple, right? Meh, hey, at least the drama makes for a good read.

    Props, man.
    December 23rd, 2009 at 05:59am
  • youprayedanddied6661

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    keep writing (:
    December 23rd, 2009 at 04:45am
  • AmberFlysHigh;

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    I love this story... Its my favorite on mibba so far. Outta what Ive read, at least. Poor Avery. If Ronnie Radke sadi that to me, I would be crushed... Hes gorgeous<333 I hope yew update soon!!
    December 13th, 2009 at 12:10am
  • soochie

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    Daaaaaamn, talk about brutal.
    December 11th, 2009 at 03:35am
  • bmth_007

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    eww what a douche hahaa
    December 11th, 2009 at 02:46am
  • youprayedanddied6661

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    wow....Ronnie is such an ass -.-
    December 11th, 2009 at 01:27am
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