This Love Is Scary - Comments

rossy_18 (100)

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I love this story please upload soon

May 9th, 2013 at 09:38pm

TogetherWeStand (100)

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you may want to put in some periods and stuff. its kinda giving me a headache and i know i cant be the only one

January 9th, 2011 at 07:40pm

Fire and Ash. (100)

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Update Please?!?!

:D :D :D : D

October 13th, 2010 at 02:41pm

Thelovelostbecka (100)

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wow!

July 7th, 2010 at 01:46am

RumbleRoar! (150)

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good story from what i have read so far (two chapters) but please please, try and put punctuation in, it's ruining the effect.x

June 12th, 2010 at 05:27pm

OhhJodie (100)

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loved the story xxx

April 25th, 2010 at 11:51pm

kierra.nichelle. (100)

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it has a good plot line;
but punctuation would be greatly appreciated
also if you could say which character was speaking and/or point of view
just some of my thoughts

March 21st, 2010 at 08:30am

FinchellLovesA7X (100)

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Love it

February 21st, 2010 at 07:43am

choirgirlx3 (100)

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love it update soon!!!!

February 20th, 2010 at 11:01pm

kay_jess23 (100)

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amazing story:]] updates soon?...

February 20th, 2010 at 12:20pm

Mason'sMONSTER (100)

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If you don't use punctuation or proper grammar, no one is going to want to read this. I didn't even get past the first chapter. Sorry, but I think that you should have typed this on Word or something, so you would have gotten notices whenever something was wrong. I bet it would be an alright story if your sentences didn't run on for half a paragraph.

February 8th, 2010 at 01:16am