It Was Winter Again. - Comments

Read the story and thought it was beautiful , thought it was tasteful and really enjoyed reading it , I'm about to start the next part :) bet it's even better

Ilovethis!!
Oh and the irony! I was listening to Winter Passing when I found this. :]

i reaelly really like it. the simplicity takes my breath away, and it felt like the room got colder while i was reading it.

i reeally like this story, but im interested to see what's going to happen next ! update soon? (:

Whoa it's so good! It's simple and I love it.

I won't comment on the whole 'good Mitchell fic' thing, but this is a well-written story nonetheless. I hope you'll keep updating.

It wasn't very nice to say that there aren't any well-written Mitchell Davis stories on Mibba. I did read all of your story so far, and you do have some grammar mistakes. Place a period after a quote if there isn't anything following it, such as 'he said'. I'm not wanting to sound rude, I'm simply giving condtructive critisism.

That was very rude of you to say "The first well written Mitchell Davis story on Mibba." That was inconsiderate to the other authors who have worked very hard on their stories. I can honestly say that there are some well-written Mitchell Davis stories. Please, don't act like yours is above the rest.

I'm curious about what will happen next. Update?

By the way, it's just a little rude that you described your story as the "First well written Mitchell Davis story on Mibba."
Even if it is true, you never know who's feelings your hurting.