OOooOOOOO man! hahaha, lol so creative, oh my gosh! I mean, i've found a few similar stories, but this one just.... is so much more creative and easygoing and orgiinal and fun and yeah. seriously, though... it's well written, and I've got a clear view of all the characters [that have spoken, anyways] which is one of the most important things [to me, anyways]. But it was great. I'm looking forward to more, definitely