We're In Love Because We're Punk - Comments

BAHAHAHA! That was hilarious! I love it! Great job!

Congrads, you won honorable mention!

Okay, so I'm sorry it took so long for me to get around to reviewing and judging! I had a lot going on, and I realize that it sounds like a lame excuse, but it's true.

Really, really, really sorry.

So, this whole thing was epic, really, and I laughed through all of it. However, I'm just going to review the first chapter.

I loved the use of the word punk. :XD I loved how it was in pretty much every sentence. It emphasized, the, ahh, 'punk-ness' of Carly. :lmfao

I am uber punk, so naturally, I hate school, education, and things that are good for me.

MY FAVORITE PART. :lmfao

"Carly!" my mother called. "Come down and get some breakfast dear!" My friends (that don't exist cuz I'm punk) would be shocked by my mother's cruel tone. But my parents abuse me, hence I am punk. My parents are so cruel. Sometimes, they even make me clean my room! Once, my dad came home from work early to spend time with my mom and told me to do my homework! How heinous is that?

Because, you know, real punks hate their parents. :file: Brilliant! :tehe:

The 'nice' lady at the front door directed me to the office. I threw her a dirty look and flipped her off because I'm punk.

How punk of her. :lmfao There's always a nice lady, isn't there?

I walked into the principal's office with a huge scowl on my face and 100% attitude bizotch! Coz I'm ghetto like dat, ya down wit dat homeslice? Um...oops, I mean, I'm punk...yeah... on with the story.

:lmfao

:lmfao

Okay, no, that's my favorite part of the story! Ghetto speak, I mean, um, punk! yeah!

:lmfao

I choked again. "You-you're Ha-Harry Potter!"

:cheese: I KNEW IT! ....Because that would be punk. Or something.

Okay, so that's just the highlights of the first chapter. There are so many hilarious bits about Billie Joe and Carly's tragically punk relationship, including all the historical inaccuracies you blatantly mention, then blame on their punkness (e.g., having a Razor in 1986 :XD ).

By the way, cookies are punk. :file:

So, once again, I apologize for taking so long to review and I swear that the results will be up within the next hour.

This story is awesome!

i'm so not punk.

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but i love it.

This is awesome, I'm going to subscribe 'cause I'm punk XD.

:lmfao
This is epic.

LYK DIS IS TEH GR8ST STORY EVEH N U SHUD B WRITIN M00R!

good teenie impression? srsly tho, its funny, and satire rocks. write more [=

ahahah I love it ! : D

hehe, this story is hilarious!

this was hilarious !
i can't wait for more, really.

i love it

Hilarious!
love it =)
"What a non punk"
teeehehehehehehe...
<3

hahaha finally got round to reading the rest, this is awesome im subscribing.

Omg. I soooooo love it. - In a punkish way 8)

Haha, I love this parody though its totally un-punk.

haa haa
this story is lyke so punk! =p
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please check out my punk story cuss I am a punk
hee hee sowrri culdn't resist
ye 10 stars *+*
please PM me when more

I love it, it's just really scary that the people who actually write like that take themselves so seriously, I'm going to subscribe.

hahaha i just read the first chapter, and it rocks, i love the way you keep saying "coz im punk". It reminds me soooooooo much of some of the stories on here and how they all desperatly want to be punk. Thanks for the comment on my story - please excuse my terrible grammer lol. Great story.

ha ha...this is so amusing.
I like it.
and she has my name! well, kinda...just a little bit different spelling.

*subcribes*

Mwa ha!