Salt In Our Wounds. - Comments

  • malkin.

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    The prequel to this fiction, or first part, or whatever, is one of my favourite fictions ever, with so much raw emotion in it... and this is the same. There is so much emotion, maybe not to raw and not to obvious, but still equally desperate and just... it's there.

    I love how you wrote about something so overcliched and overwritten as cutting and yet it wasn't cliche, it just showed pain.

    And I feel so sorry for both of them, not just Kitten, but Whip too because... yeah. It just isn't fair.

    I wish that the hope Jess sensed will be there. And in your life too.
    November 9th, 2009 at 07:52pm
  • twin.

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    Aww, this was so sad. ):
    I was like....Nooo Cat ):
    And then I felt sorry for Whiplasher and basically it was very sad but I dunno I sensed a tinge of hope at the end!

    As always, amazing writing.
    You're deffinately one of my favourite authors on Mibba, you just write Candy so well.
    November 9th, 2009 at 06:32pm
  • Kitty Emilie

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    I feel so fucking sorry for Kitten :'[ Poor baby<'3
    I NEED a follow-up to this honey!
    This is so emotional written I'm almost crying here. Love it still<3
    November 9th, 2009 at 01:03pm