It Can't Come Well - Comments

I loved this, it was good!! I loved how emotional Gerard got, and Frank, I really wish you could write more though, I think this could turn into something good :) I really think you should consider continuing with it :)

I love this!
Very interesting.
I'm not satisfied, though.
Want mooooooore.

Nnn'eh!
Sad! ):

Oh wow...
I loved this story and how you used the dare.
It was so sad, and so good.
Hehe, I agree. You should turn this into a longer story, if you would even want to, that is =)
Good luck!

I think this is a great contest entry.
I also think you should make it a short, short, SHORT story,
like two or three chapters. Maybe even four..

PLEEEASE!?!?!

I REEEEEEEEEEEEEALLY wanna know what happens next.

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