Awhhh, that totally sucks. >.< I don't think that you should rewrite it, as terrible as it is (I mean story plot wise), because it's depressing, but it's still really good. So keep it! ^.^ More?<3 xo
Cue angelic music! Quick! I really regret listening to upbeat music while I read this. I should've read it with my Snuggie and a bowl of popcorn, in complete silence. I'd be glad to help edit, with the grammar and stuff. Since I have no life, I'm usually on here everyday :-/
Ugh, I can't get over how good this is. I would love to help you write this, but I'm a really slow writer, and I'm extremely lazy. So, it probably wouldn't be a good idea, haha. Still, great story.
I like this story, it's not like every other :] *subscribes* Btw your english's awesome. Believe me I've seen bad english before, and yours is definitely not. [--> from austria.]