Kitten you know hands down I love this story and I am so grateful to be apart of it....if they have a problem with how you're writing it and dont care to fucking pay attention to you laying out the story your way or the fact that you SUBTLY PUT IN WHY SHE ACTS THAT WAY TOWARDS HIM. Screw them. I LOVE MY SWEET HONEYBEE<3
I love this story and I especially loved this chapter how George was all like "Oh hell no" when it came to those guys dancing with Ada totally classic I love it :)