I like the first chapter, but like axel apocalypse; said, I think this story is going a little too fast. And I guess I should subscribe to this story, so I know when it gets updated.
Only thing is...it's moving very fast. You might want to slow it down a bit and add some more description, tell us more of what's going on and what exactly a snake boy is for those of us who don't read Cirque du Freak. But other than that, I like it. I really like the layout, too :)
Whoa! Very nice prologue! I like it; I like the fact that you gave Sam a girlfriend. This is a very interesting scene to make a prologue from. I hope you continue this!
And if you couldn't tell, I love Cirque du Freak too.
November 17th, 2009 at 02:16am
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