Awesome story! I'm so proud of Jona, finally having the courage to actually stand up for himself, and not give in to Zander. Can't wait for the next update! (:
Oh man, thank fucking god. I seriously was ready to start screaming at the computer screen, somehow trying to get Jona to hear me say, "Break up with that asshole!". (I find it irrelevant that Jona doesn't really exist) It seems as if the little push-over has finally acquired some nerve. I loved this chapter, and it's mostly because Jona bitch slaps (and punches, and kicks) Zander. I hate him. I hate me so incredibly much. But at the same time, I'm a little sad they ended that way.
Damn, everyone in your story is so bloody hot.
And i like this layout, but both are good (: