The Balloon - Comments

I loved the summary. Just the fact that you state that the balloon will keep her safe. That totally intrigued me.

AKLj;sjd. No. I was so happy about the freaking balloon and I thought that the seagull was going to keep her company and then the little asshole pops her balloon!? WTF D:

So, the whole time, I was pretty sure she was going to jump off the cliff. But then when that stupid bird popped her balloon and she fell? My heart broke. That made me so sad D: You did an amazing job not making this cliche and the whole time I was just on the edge of my seat, and then I practically jumped up and yelled at my computer. D:

Incredible.

Holy shit. That would have placed, no doubt.

All the way through I had no idea what to think. I'm sitting there, telling myself it's a young girl, she wouldn't leap off the edge. She was just being a young girl.
Then I found out she was older, I'm just thinking, 'Would she?'

Then the twist at the end made a twist in my gut, and my eyes were wide open and my jaw dropped. Holy shit.