OH MY GOD. THAT WAS AMAZING. The end. I loved the end.
Overall, I don't really think I understood it. Like, at all. It was just really messy and the part before the end threw me off, but the ending somehow made it less confusing without doing anything at all. Um, yea. The ending made it good, and the middle. You did a good job, though. Good luck!
November 16th, 2009 at 11:29pm
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