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  • Bastard Son.

    Bastard Son. (200)

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    November 28th, 2009 at 12:28am
  • all for believing.

    all for believing. (150)

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    OH EM GEE! XD Sara, I love you and your dirty mind.

    The first thing I said was, "Harry and Sirius... really? I thought she had a thing for Draco and Harry. lmfao

    I absolutely love how you started the story with the map. That was brilliant. There was sex, but it wasn't just sex. It was an exchange of every emotion, a true connection. The fact that Harry's bravado lessened and he became shy infront of Sirius was adorable. xD That was my favorite part. Sirius was both dominant but gentle. You combined those traits perfectly. The ending was great. You painted a lovely picture that I think could make someone who was opposed to this pairing read.

    BECAUSE YOU IS AWESOME.
    November 25th, 2009 at 07:01pm
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