Breaking Down & Coming Undone - Comments

i was nervous when i saw that it was about a red wing but i must say this was beautiful and such a good idea for a story. :)

You know that guy, the one that you want so bad that it hurts. How your whole body tingles when someone mentions him, or how you try to bring him up whenever you can? The guy that you want but you know is so incredible bad for you, that you could never, ever, let your guard down enough to be with him? The one you swore you would always protect your heart from?

absolutely loved those 4 lines !
loved the story !

I loved this. It was so cute.
Awesome Job! :)

awww this is sooo cute..

Brianna, this was beautiful.
Seriously, I was tearing up at parts.
It was sad when she left him...like it took him all that to realize how big of an idiot he was.
And then him showing up just because Sean sent him that letter.
That was perfect.
He stuck with her & proved that he was worthy.
Seriously, baby, amazing. <3