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  • Mxprincess241

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    i was nervous when i saw that it was about a red wing but i must say this was beautiful and such a good idea for a story. :)
    July 29th, 2011 at 04:12pm
  • tiffaannyyy

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    You know that guy, the one that you want so bad that it hurts. How your whole body tingles when someone mentions him, or how you try to bring him up whenever you can? The guy that you want but you know is so incredible bad for you, that you could never, ever, let your guard down enough to be with him? The one you swore you would always protect your heart from?

    absolutely loved those 4 lines !
    loved the story !
    January 7th, 2010 at 03:08am
  • Renee Says;

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    I loved this. It was so cute.
    Awesome Job! :)
    December 23rd, 2009 at 05:56am
  • bubble332

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    awww this is sooo cute..
    December 4th, 2009 at 02:20am
  • Jessica;

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    Brianna, this was beautiful.
    Seriously, I was tearing up at parts.
    It was sad when she left him...like it took him all that to realize how big of an idiot he was.
    And then him showing up just because Sean sent him that letter.
    That was perfect.
    He stuck with her & proved that he was worthy.
    Seriously, baby, amazing. <3
    November 14th, 2009 at 05:48pm
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