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  • Sara

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    beautiful. i love the way you described the kiss at the end.

    it honestly reminded me of a perfume commercial xD

    just lovely.
    October 29th, 2007 at 11:52am
  • pariah.

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    Cool. But maybe it would have been better as a long poem. Not saying tis bad, but constructive criticism will help you improve.
    October 13th, 2007 at 06:52am
  • Judu

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    Thats Kool. =]
    September 25th, 2007 at 12:06pm
  • Billy Corgan.

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    Lestat.. although he can be such a cruel and mean person (as shown In Interveiw with the Vampire), he can be so sweet. I love how you wrote it as Anne would.

    very, very good job.
    September 25th, 2007 at 07:32am
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