This was very sexy and seductive and I liked it a lot. Your tone matched your writing pretty well. This is short and sweet, but you get the point across in a way that makes sense to the situation. I'm pretty sure you could have added more to this if you wanted. But I'm going to have to agree with what everyone else said about how creative your writing style is. My favorite line in this would have to be this: I do not live in the moment as I think of tomorrow morning; of where we shall end up once the sun awakens. A perfect woman asks me to love her, and my first instinct is to decline. Well written and beautiful.
July 21st, 2012 at 05:25am