November 21st, 2009 at 04:34am
Good Girls Go Bad - Comments
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you were right i loved this one. i hope you do decide to do a one shot series.November 20th, 2009 at 05:25am
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^^^^^^^^^^^^^^BECAUSE YOU ARE A GENIUS!!!!^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
hahahaha. but seriously. Natta's idea is getting my vote:)
Dirty Little Girl = hott. Good Girls Go Bad = hotter!!!! lol. great job!November 17th, 2009 at 03:10am -
First off, thanks for the shout out! Second off, I love reading the comments where people call me a genius, haha. And see, everyone loved my fantastic idea! ;)
You know what I loved? This! So good, Rhian! Like I'm at work right now but reading this really made me wish that I wasn't. It also made me wish that I wasn't single and that I worked as a bartender so that my boyfriend (who doesn't exist) and I could like ... re-enact this or something. Haha. That might be what they call an overshare. Or a sign of just how awesome this was!
I think this following part actually made me shiver a little and made me go all "iiih!". Then I had to quickly look around to make sure that no one heard me, haha.
Biting her lip she watched, frozen to the spot as he walked up to her, his dark chocolate eyes full of lust.
“I fucking want you bad.” He growled as he reached her,
*bows down to your ability to write incredibly hot oneshots*November 16th, 2009 at 06:31am -
The adventures of Sarah and Brian are definitely fantastic! I loved it I'm off to subscribe so I don't miss the next one :DNovember 16th, 2009 at 06:16am
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oh yeah...really nice idea!!;}:}
subscribed;)
..maybe this will turn out to be a storyNovember 16th, 2009 at 02:45am -
Ooh, sexy.
But it's a little awkward where those skeletal hands were on her hoodie. Surprised Brian didn't make a comment about it.
But I like Natta's idea. =}
Loved it!November 16th, 2009 at 02:35am -
that was amazing as always loved it :)November 16th, 2009 at 01:15am
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;) Amazing hun! :D As always...great job! I loved it. :)November 16th, 2009 at 12:25am
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Hot damn! That was freaking amazing!
I love Natta's idea! Do it!November 16th, 2009 at 12:11am -
I am definitely loving this. Natta is a genious for suggesting this to you, and you are amazing for doing it!November 16th, 2009 at 12:11am
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wow that was fantastic
loving the idea of these one-shots about the two of them!November 15th, 2009 at 11:53pm -
damn!
thanks for letting em know about this!November 15th, 2009 at 10:13pm -
Thanks for letting me know! Natta is a genius for suggesting it :D
I can't wait to see what happens between them next :]November 15th, 2009 at 10:13pm -
i loved it
very nice
i can't wait to read more of them
update soon please
<3 MicheleNovember 15th, 2009 at 10:07pm -
Gosh such a good idea! I love the fact that their relationship is so "with the flow" in a way. Kind of like they really like each other, but neither is trying to complicate everything, but just go along with it and see where it goes. Once again, really well written! I can't wait for that other one-shot! ^.^November 15th, 2009 at 09:16pm
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That, hun, was fantastic!! I loved it, and I really do think you should go with Natta's idea and keep us entertained with the adventures of Sarah and Brian :D
Brilliant! xxNovember 15th, 2009 at 09:13pm -
oh my God, that was insanely hot and I subscribed, hoping for an update soon :PNovember 15th, 2009 at 09:12pm
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OH BOY!
I'm gonna go ahead and say that Natta's idea is complete genius and you have to do it, haha!
Loved it and thank you for telling about it! :DNovember 15th, 2009 at 08:48pm
Holy smokes!
I officially love this idea for a series of one shots.
This one by far is one of my favorites. I loved it!