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  • TheCoreysGirl

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    Wow! This is really very well-written, and very brilliant too. :)
    July 29th, 2010 at 06:50am
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    Wow, very discriptive chapter. That sucks that Mae dies... :( But I still like this!
    November 18th, 2009 at 01:30am
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    This is a very well written story so far. The only thing that is really bugging me is that there is hardly any spaces between paragraphs in the first chapter. And there are some point of view changes that are bugging me. But other than those things, everything else looks great. I can't wait to read more of this!
    November 17th, 2009 at 01:49am
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