The Girl Who Cried Blood - Comments

Wow! This is really very well-written, and very brilliant too. :)

Wow, very discriptive chapter. That sucks that Mae dies... :( But I still like this!

This is a very well written story so far. The only thing that is really bugging me is that there is hardly any spaces between paragraphs in the first chapter. And there are some point of view changes that are bugging me. But other than those things, everything else looks great. I can't wait to read more of this!