Walk On - Comments

WOW! the suspense was intense!! it really had me hooked :)

Well done!! I like this story because I know that most teenage suicide results from bullying and harassment in school. :/

Keep up the good writing!

Wow! Very dramatic, but also very creative too. :) Good job writing this! :)

Very Descriptive and well written. Tragic ending , quite the twist for you lol. You did a nice job with leading up to it and everything. Nice job, but it's such a cliffhanger lol I'm tempted to turn this into a poem xD