Keeping On Without You - Comments

  • God, I can't believe how sad this story makes me.
    It's like every new chapter, I get closer and closer to crying my eyes out.
    I really want to punch Oli for leaving the cat.
    He left every other part of Addie there. Why couldn't he take the cat?
    Other than that it was amazing as always.
    December 13th, 2009 at 09:10pm
  • I must confess I read this whole entire story prequel and all in less than a day. I love this story the most out of all the Oli stories I have read. I hope you update soon! <3, Erika
    December 13th, 2009 at 06:02am
  • Wow. First of all, the whole mentioning of missing the concert that he looked forward to and was so excited about just made me so sad. That part was just freakin' heart wrenching.

    Second, the conversation with Tom. Perfect.

    Third. I can't believe he left Coco behind. :(

    You're amazing.
    December 13th, 2009 at 05:10am
  • it's so good. I think maybe he should have kept the cat though. So he's not so alone.
    December 12th, 2009 at 06:02pm
  • I'm still wondering what's going to happen to her mom... and whoever is going to find that bag.
    hmmmmm oh how my mind wanders.
    December 12th, 2009 at 05:44pm
  • Aw, this is so fucking sad.

    Almost unbearably so.

    But it's so good.

    8)
    December 12th, 2009 at 05:04am
  • He left Coco?!?!?! I worked damn hard for that cat and now it's just sitting outside pawing at the door?

    I'm sorry, I know that there's more important issues that this chapter gave - but I can't get the fact that he left my pride and joy outside to maybe find a family again. Jesus... ok, I need to speak about the actual story now. But I'm still very upset with his actions :p

    "But not because I wanted to be far away from her now, but because I couldn’t take it here. I couldn’t stand being here without her, in this place that she belonged now, and I didn’t."
    Odd how nothing else in this story has affected me as much as hearing that. I got a wee but emotional - not like sobbing, but the possibility of a mini tear came. You, my friend, are damn good.

    I'm so happy that TJ made an appearance though, even if it was over the phone. The kid makes me whole day better, and I can almost forget about Oli and his wrongdoings about the feline....
    Even if it was Tom that encouraged him to leave it.

    Heartless brothers....
    December 12th, 2009 at 01:14am
  • So, I'm still trying to figure out if Addie is really alive, but you're just making everyone think she's dead and then you're going to bring her back into the story.. And I'm still wondering if Oliver is ever going to meet Addie's mom? Seeing as how he is kind of living in her house and decided to drink all her alcohol.? And the cat? He better take the kitty with him!

    Good god. :( This is so terribly sad.
    December 6th, 2009 at 11:01pm
  • I actually squeeled when I noticed you update xD
    I can't imagine how oli is going to bebable to tell everyone
    Addie past away ): maybe he won't even tell anyone! Maybe
    He is going to pretend she never existed! D: oh my how
    Will Addie's mom react?!
    December 6th, 2009 at 06:45am
  • Reading this broke my heart a little bit. It's so sad and I can definately relate to everything, I've lost someone I loved with my whole heart, and it's not something you get over, ever. I just realized I said someone I "loved" when I should have said love. You are such an amazing writer, the way you described Oli's emotions is so acurate. I'm really looking forward to reading this story.
    December 6th, 2009 at 04:42am
  • Oh, how this chapter almost made me cry :(
    I cant wait until the next update!!!
    December 6th, 2009 at 03:16am
  • ohhhhhh :( poor oli. poor everyone involved. I would have no idea what to do and what to do with myself. I'm glad coco's there though.
    December 5th, 2009 at 07:09pm
  • Aw, that was so sad.

    I even cried.

    I feel so bad for him. Poor Oli.
    December 5th, 2009 at 05:16pm
  • Another amazingly emotionally provoking chapter!
    Loved it so much.
    I can't predict exactly what's going to happen at this point,
    but whatever does happen,
    I'm sure it will be amazing.
    Another soon?
    December 5th, 2009 at 04:44pm
  • Loss is something I never dealt well with. But this wasn’t loss. This was having someone ripped away from you at the very worst time, when you need them most. Someone you loved with a heart bigger than the world. And there was nothing I could do. I had to swallow and ignore how swollen my throat had gotten from crying and move on. I had to remember that Addie would always be with me, but it was getting increasingly harder every moment.

    I loved this part, well actually I loved most paragraohs but this was just amazing. And even though I had begun to feel hatred for addie in the last chapters of the sequel, it's kind of unfamilliar without her...
    especially when oliver is all alone :( makes me sad...I kind of miss her
    December 5th, 2009 at 02:08pm
  • Loss is something I never dealt well with. But this wasn’t loss. This was having someone ripped away from you at the very worst time, when you need them most. Someone you loved with a heart bigger than the world. And there was nothing I could do. I had to swallow and ignore how swollen my throat had gotten from crying and move on. I had to remember that Addie would always be with me, but it was getting increasingly harder every moment.

    I loved this part, well actually I loved most paragraohs but this was just amazing. And even though I had begun to feel hatred for addie in the last chapters of the sequel, it's kind of unfamilliar without her...
    especially when oliver is all alone :( makes me sad...I kind of miss her
    December 5th, 2009 at 02:08pm
  • It is so fucking sad but i still love the story and i love you for writing something this genius ...I fucking cried when Addie died :(
    December 5th, 2009 at 01:20pm
  • Still feel so bad for Oli!
    December 5th, 2009 at 07:51am
  • Kay first off i wanted to comment before and i just didn;t:$
    I can;t believe Addie Died!:|
    I was soooo shocked! But you did say you didn;t want the story to turn out like all the others.
    I LOVE THIS STORY! I have no idea where you sequel is going but i hope you continue!:)
    December 3rd, 2009 at 10:22pm
  • Good lord. I almost squealed when I saw you updated. I am so sad now. I want Oliver to get help. You're amazing.
    November 30th, 2009 at 06:21am