He Doesn't Look A Thing Like Jesus; But He Talks Like A Gentleman - Comments

I love this story! update soon, please? :)

Hi hi:3...ur, i love this story. can you please continue, and with more Jasyn and Alex?? pleeeasee??? thanks

I miss this :(

:O that was the best chapter i have read in a while. please update soon? <3

Right now I think that Chase is kind of snobby, but I am loving the story. I am only on chapter 7 and I am sorry for lacking, but I really do love it and I am excited to read more, but I can't because I am babysitting and they will be home soon. YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER KAYLIN AND ALY! <333

wow!!! I love this story! post soon!

Oh my goodness Kaylin, your story has me on the edge. I LOVE YOU FOR THAT! AMAZING HUN!

Super good. LOVE IT!

..uhm... so im very late on reading this... but im student directing a production at the moment, but i got to it.. so

WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT!?!?! KAY WOAHHH.
first. Alex. mm. so yummy. so, i've decided to help kill tommy? kay!? so yeah. Jack.. Jack was an idiot for the pill thingy, but when he first met up with Chase and he was all kissy kissy was FUCKING ADORABLE! tehehe. im really interested to see if shes gonna keep the baby or not. i have this feeling she will, bu tyou ugys might surprise me. haha.
i have to say.. Zack<3 haha. alsoo
“Agreed, but this is getting way to estrogen-y,” BEST LINE EVER <3 lmao
jack bitching out chases mom? best thing ever. i could so see him getting like that. You guys both write Alex and Jack SO. FUCKING. WELL. it's ridiculous. it's just the perfect personalities for this story setting. (:
i can not WAIIIT for the next update (:

OHMIGOD.

I AM SO MUCH IN SHOCK RIGHT NOW.

The chapter was friggin-tastic amazing! If that makes any sense. It was so much to take in and I cannot believe it. It's your story so do what you want with it, but I think since Chase's parents are such douchebags, that she should keep the baby and go live with Jackkkk. (:

Grace Gaskarth.. I like the sound of that.. (because my names Grace hehe) even though she seems like a bitch so far. anyways, I just started reading, up to chapter seven now. I'm excited for the rest! ;)

That's not the end is it? Or is there going to be a sequel?
Anyway... I had a suspicion Chace was pregnant during the chapter =D I just wonder what she is going to do. And I think the families have to end this feud. It's stupid. Maybe Chace can leave her parents and live with the Barakats? They seem more accepting and wouldn't hold the feud against her. Or she could live with Alex and his mum? Her mum seems like a real bitch. :) I can't believe Tommy raped Jasyn! D= And I really think Jaysn and Alex need to get together :)

Update soon <3

Okayyyyyyyyy, wow.
That longgggg wait was totally worth it!
hahahahha
Firstly, holy shit! That starting point was intense! haha, I was so proud of Alex. At first I thought he was going to hit someone, but then the way he dealt with the situation was... brilliant haha. How dare his dad say that shit, and wtf was with Dawn? How rude. haha.
Then Chase walking out as well just made me smile, and the way you wrote the whole car bit how Alex was speeding etc, just portrayed his feelings superbly, and I liked the way how Chase was kind of scared but at the same time just let Alex be angry instead of being like 'Are you okay? I'm so sorry!" etc. The silence really was the cherry on top for me, because I think he deserved to be pissed at the world, and yeah haha. Then his mommy was the cutest as well :)

Secondly; the whole Jasyn and the salad making bit. I got extremely nervous when her mom started questioning her bracelet from Chase, haha. But I thought her final thoughts about how she hoped her mom truly meant what she said about just wanting her daughter to be happy were sweet, because that means she's considering Alex being more than a friend some time in the near future ;) haha
I wanted to hit somebody at the mention of Tommy though, and I thought it was considerably awkward how she blurted out the whole sex thing to her mother, but hey, at least she won't keep insisting how nice he supposedly is :)

Thirdly;
“Agreed, but this is getting way to estrogen-y,”
hahahhaha :) that was cute.
FINALLY! A member of the families other than Jack, Jasyn, Alex and Chase that doesn't mind a bit of civilness. I'm so glad that Liz didn't like freak out. She had no reason to or anything, but that was cool, because now Alex can grow a pair and get move on with Jasyn so they can finally get in a relationship :) haha, and Jack and Chase can fuck the rest of the haters, because they're cuties haha. I'm worried about the Barakat's reactions though... The Gaskarth side may be cleared, due to the already falling apart ties that Chase and especially Alex have with their families, but the Barakats? hmm, we'll see haha.

Fourthly;
PSHH hahahhahahhahahah, love it how you made probably the most famous All Time Low lyric seem so simplistic hahahah 'that makes me a liar?' 'oh yeah, that works.' 'k, i'm going to sleep now.'
:)

Fifthly;
Alex admitting he truly like Jasyn... CUTE haha

Sixthly;
NO!
YOU STUPID GIRL CHASE!
YOU EVEN STUPIDER BOY JACK!
WHAT THE HELL!
:O omgggggggggg,haha. i always thought it was tommy that would have likeeee spiked Chase's drink or something, but holy shit! Jack Barakat should be persecuted, hahah, i don't care how drunk he was/was not, his reasoning for giving her that thing was just stupid, and her reason for taking it was even stupider, yeah sure, she loves him, but if it was requited love, and she didn't want to take it, then BAM he wouldn't have cared if she denied his 'pharmy'
THEY'RE BOTH IDIOTS !
and behind those thoughts, somewhere at the back of my head i am thinking, where is alex, did he find Jasyn, and why is she so intoxicated? ahha they better be together if tommy's at the party, which he is haha

seventhly;
HAHAHHA
ohhhh heck yes, Alex Gaskarth considers me as a cute girl, AND zack merrick is chatting me up. my fictional life is complete! ahhahahhahah
HOLY MOTHER OF FUCKING GOD! I was reading them section by section and making my comments, but oh my god, tommy raped her! that's actually absolutely horrible, and... holy shit/
but thank god for alex.
shiittttt! oh my jesus. that was seriously intense. (i just finished the whole thing)
CHASE IS PREGNANT! that's soo unexpected! because she cleared herself from thinking that, and now she is and :O
hahah, but don't worry about the cliche-ness, there is none, trust me. your whole story is so original and i love it to death, and there's so much going on, and :O mrs gaskarth and jack, i'm so glad jack told her off, i don't think you understand, what a bitch!
but now i'm worried about what chase is going to do when she wakes up, is she going to forgive jack because she loves him, like how that was the reason she took the pill? or is she going to abide by her parents shitty rules and not talk to him... but that's like totally illegal hahah because technically she's carrying his kid, and jack can like... sue hahaha

oh my god, this was an amazing update, and i have said oh my god like-284234859384 times hahah, but it truly was brilliant. my final concluding statement shall be;

ALEX GASKARTH TOTALLY SAVED JASE AND CHASE <3
hahha

now don't kill me with suspense, update soon!

five-twenty nine: Yeah, so it was way to fecking good to stop and write comments to each chapter while in the back of my head I'd be wondering what would happen next. So I expect the next UPDATE extremely soon to find out what happens? Will Alex's aunt and uncle find out about his secret? Can't wait to read an update and find out.

My mind just exploded.
Thank you, that is all.
<3

three-four: So two other awesome chapters and still loving this more and more. Wondering what's going to happen next? Can't wait to read and find out.

one-two: It's only the first two chapters and I'm already loving it. The descriptions were perfect as well as the plot. Guessing you kinda got the idea from R&J of Shakespeare? Can't wait to read the next two chapters.

So I was wondering why I wasn't getting updates and then I realised I'm not actually subscribed :| haha I'm doing that now <3

I aaaaaaaaaaaaabsolutely love this story, kudos to both of you!
I think that Mama and Poppa Barakat/Gaskarth should get over this feud and not cause dramaramarama when they find out about the coupless.

OHGOD*spazzes* FUCKKINGGG LOVEDDDEDDDDD THE TWITTERRR IDEAAA AHHHH update bitches <3 <3 lots of love from creepy stalker fan reader person
*stares at screen waiting for update*