Honey even if the ending was rushed you still managed to do it better then anyone else. :) Sorry I went off mibba for ages so I didn't comment for awhile. I'm going to bed now but the first thing I'll do when I wake up is catch up on Fate and leave you a comment there too. XD keep up the good stories.
Still loved it to bits! It made smile and actually the ending was great...it left me thinking great things for them ;) Can't wait for the next one hun!
i love the story hun i have been waiting to read it sence it started but i wanted to wait till it had more chapter because i knew i would love it! i cried out 'no' what i saw that there werent anymore chapters i could read tonight!
one: they are cute. two: i knew i'd be seeing this opposition of thoughts at some point. it's always interesting when it's the guy, though. or, rather, at least it is to me. well done :)