Anise - Comments

This was a super interesting story! I really enjoyed your voice in this, it's a writing style I don't often see and thought was well done for the most part. I would just take some time to thoroughly edit so that grammatical or punctuation errors don't take away from the story. Keep writing! Great job!

I really enjoyed reading this. It was an interesting plotline, you stayed true to both the plot and the characters, which is great. I was glad to see it didn't jump all over the place and everything came together. I also liked that you provided dialogue with a brogue to help the reader really feel the characters as they spoke. The only thing that I would suggest is some revision. I found quite a few typing, spelling, and grammatical errors. Not enough to stop me from reading, but enough to stand out in my mind. Beyond that, it was a truly enjoyable reading experience.

This story is not something I usually read. I really don't know what to write about it, because it didn't exactly hold my attention. I'm not saying you're a bad author, because you are actually quite good! I just don't read this usually(:. I may check you more of your work, because you ARE a great author(:

It's really good, I love the layout, I'm glad comment swap brought me to your story, my laptop is running out of battery right now so I can't read most of it, but I'll subscribe so I don't miss out on reading what sounds like a pretty good story.

I reallly enjoyed the concept of this story. I fell in love with the characters. I love the layout so much. There were little to no grammatical errors that I noticed. The dialogue was great and I love that it was properly formatted. I also love that it was a diary format. You have a lot of potential.
Happy writing!!!!

I love your story. Keep writing!

Hello fellow comment swapper:

When I first saw this, I thought this was just going to be one of those weird romantic novels that my mom reads. Instead, I was glad to fin that I actually liked it. The characters were likable and they seemed very real. I also thought that your style of writing was fantastic and made the story all the more enjoyable. There are minimal grammar errors compared to how much is written so that is a thumbs up. Keep writing and keep being awesome.

Comment Swap.

I'll just be reading a random chapter to comment on your writing and such, so that you get feedback for further chapters rather than just the first two or three.

From your summary I can tell you are a good writer though, but lets see if that hold true for chapter number...6.

I love the accents you have in the dialogue that totally makes me believe that these characters are actually talking and I am watching a movie.

HE bucked her and she fell and hurt her leg and arm.- I don't think you meant to have HE capitalized like that.

I was raining the night she died. No one knows how the MacDonald's - I think you meant to has 'It was raining'

By picking this chapter it's like I got a story within a story with the dialogue, it was awesome. When I was reading I was very sucked into it.

I will for sure recommend this story, good work.
=D

This is lovely. Honestly. You're descriptions are beautiful. I didn't read the entire thing, I don't have the time right now. But, honestly very lovely. I was really impressed; it's difficult to find good writers like yourself on Mibba. Thank you for sharing.

Comment swap sent me here;
Wow. Just, wow. That's all I have to say. I didn't read it all, but I didn't need to, to know that you're an amazing writer. Your use of details and description is absolutely phenomenal. I was extremely impressed with what I read. You're getting a recommendation, for sure. Keep up the good work! :)

Uh... Wow.
You've done such an amazing job.
Your characters have basically come to life. Although I find the old scottish talk slightly annoying. You have no idea. It makes me want to beat them with a rake.
Anyway, other than that, which I actually think is great because that takes a lot of skill and dedication to pull off.
I love the descriprions. And the main plot is just... amazing. I am yet to finish, but I definitely will.

Comment swap brought me here. I have to say that is some pretty good writing. The characters are original and well thought out and your writing flows well with details and descriptions. I don’t see any errors in grammar or spelling, everything flows at a great pace and is all around perfect, I even laughed at a few parts - especially the scene where she asks to go to the bathroom and he doesn‘t even understand. Excellent writing, keep it up!

Hello. :) Well, let's get started, shall we? :p

Woah. This is seriously such a great idea for a story, I would have never thought of something like this! The summary drew me in from the very beginning. It's descriptive and I like that, it makes me want to read more.

Even if this was finished, I will def read more of your stories if they're like this. :)

Well done! :) Keep up the great work and share your imagination with me and your fans. :)

comment swap brought me here.
This seems like a very interesting idea for a story. Reminds me of the TV series Once Upon a Time, Idk if it was inspired on that, but it really reminds me of it. I love Cam, she's so skeptical and sort of ironic. I didn't read the whole thing, but I will be back later, trust me :D
I did see a couple of mistakes but the commenter below already pointed them out, and it's no biggie, you can correct them in the blink of an eye. Very good story, keep writing!

Maybe I should mention, more as an afterthought.
it's recommended.

(Comment Swap)
I'll have to ask about the names of the chapters, since it doesn't amke any sense to me.
" readers her past life" is " reads her past life"?
"As long flourishes" ? love?
(Chapter 11)
interesting dialect, from the specific time, or?
"Its" is "It's" as in "It is"?
There are a few incients like it. best fixed, to make the story hold together.
Aside from that, this story is interesting.
It's a curious concept.
You never can change others, not in this sense.
Most people trying only get hurt in the squichy aftermath.

Wow, I love your story. All the characters in it are great, and I absolutely love your style of writing. I really hope you continue writing, and post more of your stories on mibba! I I will definitely read and subscribe to them all ;D

I will be updating Scarlet Rose when I next have access to the internet but i only have a few chapters written

Yay!!! I'm so happy to finally read the ending!!! Now you just need to finish scarlet rose and everything will be perfect. PLEASE!!!

Alright everyone I've updated 14 chapters in the last 10 minutes, which completes the entire story. Thank you all so much!