Waves - Comments

Simple and nice drabble.
I liked it and that picture is beautiful!
Loving it!

There's really no other word to describe this besides beautiful. <3

I love tsunamis <3

For a minute I didn't know if you were actually going to put tsunamis in it because it was just in the summary and I thought maybe it didn't have to do with the actual story, but then you pull that on me and...yeah. I really adored it. A lot of emotion in such a short story [/copying above poster] and it was very nice to read.

And yes, the "run" was super effective and gave me chills *___*

Wow.. that's all I can say upon reading this. I mean, my god, for a short story you sure did pack a lot of emotion into it.

The descriptions were great; from the ocean, to the way she stood in the water, down to the way she ran from the waves. It was all just simply beautiful - tragically beautiful.

The short sentence and one-word sentences were used effectively, much more so than if you had have made them longer. The simple word Run packed more of a punch than anything else you could have said.

The last sentence was my favourite; it was extremely powerful. The pulling, pulling.. repetition was such an effective way of describing what was happening to her, without actually saying it in the simplest of terms. It was a terrible thing to happen, but you managed to describe it in almost a poetic kind of way. It was just beautiful.

Beautiful.

I really liked this drabble. You used really good imagery throughout and it actually seemed like it could be the account of someone in the tsunami. Good job. :)