Damaged - Comments

i dont like how everyone is ganging up on zack. they make it worse by sticking their nose where it doesnt belong. if they didnt bitch him out about having sex with celia he never would have invited jayme out

I...

Can't...

Believe...

It's overrr.

I'm kinda sad about it... you know how much I loved this onee. But only kinda sad since I know there will be a sequel soon.

*Grins*

Also... Like I im'ed you a few moments ago...

IT'S ABOUT FUCKING TIME THOSE TWO FUCKING IDIOTS REALIZED EVERYONE AROUND THEM WAS FUCKING RIGHT ABOUT HOW FUCKING STUPID THEY WERE WHEN THEY FUCKING DECIDED TO GO AND FUCKING GET MARRIED!

Woww...

That's a serious usage of the word 'fuck' right there.

But yeahh... I loved it all the same. Especially biting Brian. Bastard deserved it.

*Nods*

I'd tell you to update... but that would be useless... sooo...

Get started on the sequel....

Soonly.

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So yeahh.

I loved it.

I had so much fun writing it with you. If I weren't so on everyone elses' side about them getting married, I might feel bad for the two of them for all the shit that they're catching.

Unfortunately for them, I think they're just as stupid as everyone else does just jumping to a fucking marriage like that.

Anyways...

I can't wait to see what happens next.

Update it.

Soooon.

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Okay, so I loved this one.

I still think Zack and Celia were stupid for just jumping into being married though... but I kinda feel bad having made her cry...

So to make myself feel better about it I'm blaming it on her pregancy hormones.

Haha... I know I said this last night but yeah... I fucking love]/i] Zack's mom.

I cannot wait for that barbecue. It is going to be fabulous, especially since Zack has no idea what is about to hit him dead in the face.

SO yeah...

Update.

Soon!

Because, as much as I loved this one... we both know that I'm really looking forward to the next two installments most.

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See...

This is yet another one of those chapters that started out all nice and friendly and then got ugly.

Very, very ugly.

It was tons of fun yelling at the two of them though. And like I already told you.... I am very proud of that little guilt trip Brian and I set into motion with the whole 'You need to think about your unborn children before you go and do stupid shit' thing.

We would know all about that, hmm?

Seriously though... It was awesome and I can't wait until you post the next one...

His mom is going to be soooo fucking pissed.

It's gonna be awesomeeeee.

Update it.

Soon.

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Hehe...

This one was kinda fluff overload for the most part...but I loved it. Brian and Cami being so nervous was kinda really adorable to be honest.

The bit between Matt and Brian also made me laugh. I love how neither one of them are disillusioned enough to think that I wouldn't cause a shitload of bodily harm to Brian if I thought for even one second he didn't feel the way he claimed he did about my sister.

And the relief about Bri and Cami's baby being a girl? Probably not unwarranted. I mean, not that I wouldn't be happy for them and all... but it would be a pretty awful thing to have to face due to the history there.

Jesus fuck.

Way to give me a heart attack at the end of this. Seriously. I was sitting there going 'Shit... he can't lose another baby because that'll devastate him' only for the twin-bomb to be dropped.

Still don't know whether to be relieved about it or try and reach through my computer to smack you for the mild panic attack.

But yeah... I loved it.

Update it.

SOOOOON.

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Okay...

So I loved this one. Even if I was unconscious for 85% of it.

Matt being so worried was freaking adorable. But what was even more adorable, and the really big factor in turning me into goo? How good he is with Emma. I was practically Mopping myself up off the floor because of that. It was just soo effin' sweet. He's such a good dad, and husband in this.

Makes me smile.

Oh and remind me to thank that nurse for making sure my kid was fed and not flirting with my husband to no end while doing so.

I'm also very amused that everyone is so stunned that Matt did not, in fact, kill the dumb fuck that decided to put his hands on me.

Yay... my parents aren't being complete jackasses anymore! They don't suck in this one anymore!

*Does a dance*

One less story in which I have crap parents...

Which as I pointed out... I have an abundance of in your ficcys.

Anyways...

Update it soon.

Very soon.

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I'm with you...

I really have no idea what to say about this one.

I mean it was a really good chapter... aside from that dick deciding to go all caveman on me like the retard he clearly is. I mean, seriously... did he not get a good look at Matt? The man is a fucking tank, so what made that moron think putting his hands on his wife was a fuckin' brilliant idea?

Because it wasn't.

Obviously... Matt managed to hand off our kid (or rather Zack had enough sense in his head to take her from him) and start beating the shit out of him in like 2.5 seconds.

You know what I've noticed about this one in the last few chapters particularly...

Zack and I act like siblings... we can be complete assholes to one another but we're there and nice to each other when it really counts.

*points at chapter to prove point*

It's kinda funny actually.

Dude... the guys are soo lucky that the girls weren't there when they started making jokes about Matt being in jail... they'd have all had their asses kicked, and/or been in the dog house for an indefinite amount of time.

Bawwww. Seriously. Overprotective Matt makes me smile.

He's kinda adorable, really. In a 'Come anywhere near her and I'll gut you and use your innards as Christmas decorations' dangerous kind of way. Godd I feel bad for Emma when she gets to the dating age...

Awwwwww he's crying? Poor Matt...

Anyways...

Update it.

I want to know what the fuck happens.

Now.

Right now.

So hurry and get to it.

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Well...

That was definitely not what I was expecting from this chapter.

It was good though. I was extremely amused with how, after Celia and I cornered her sister in the bathroom, we started telling her what the fuck was going on and not giving her a choice. Not that you can really blame us... I mean I may not know her but its very rare that someone deserves that kind of treatment...

And yes... I do believe there are times when people deserve that... but only when its something that is completely mutual. Girls need to know you can't just beat the shit out of a guy. If you can dish it you can take it.

The husband in this though? Total dick. I dare him to even glance at me or Celia wrong... Matt and Zack will have him laid out cold quicker than you can blink... especially when they find out the reason for that bathroom break.

But yeah...

I wanna fuckin' know what happens.

Update it.

Soon.

Very, very, very sooon.

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Really?

I mean, really?

What have I told you about ending things like that? Are you trying to get yourself maimed, because it's definitely starting to seem that way.

Just... why? WHY would you end it there knowing that I was going to bitch you out for it as soon as I finished reading it.

Update it.

Now.

Right now.

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Wow.

Parents aren't douches much are they? Note the sarcasm.

Seriously, I get that its probably not the most ideal situation for them to deal with since they kinda hate Brian, and really not for no good reason, but if I'm not still pissed at him, then they should be able to deal with it.

And as for the whole "they don't wanna hear from either of us" bullshit. Fine. Whatev. Not like I talked to them much anyway.

But yeah.

I loved it.

Update it.

Now.

XD

Sooooo.

I loved it.

I really did. Especially that bit where Jimmy reminds me I said if Zack didn't stop being a douche I was gonna beat the fuck outta him, causing me to promptly ask who's babysitting so that I can do it now that I'm not knocked up. XD

Also, I was wondering when mine and Cami's parents were going to make an appearance. They get mentioned often enough.

And so you know, if anything gets broken in my house when Brian and Cami give the news, they're paying for it.

Update.

Soon.

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Loved the update.

Absolutely loved it. Even if Zack was a douche ans a half to Celia and had no right to be. I mean, I get he's upset about Jaime and all, but it doesn't give him the right to treat her like shit.

Also, I found it adorable how all the guys got so protective of her when they found out what he said. I mean, I'm sure I'd have beat Matt senseless if he hadn't done something about Zack's douche-baggery but the fact that they're so willing to got and beat his hangover out and some sense into him.

So yeah...

Update.

Soon.

Because I love them and desperately need them.

*grins*

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Uhh yeah.

I loved it.

But I think you already knew that.

I mean seriously. It's not like I could be unhappy... I'm a pregnant cow in one less story of yours, Lol.

*Grins*

You knew I was gonna say it.

You know you did.

All that aside, however, I also loved beating on Zack for being such a fucking idiot. I mean really... does he not know what a condom is? Matt and I are getting him a case of the fucking things for his birthday, and maybe even Christmas.

We'll probably throw in a class on how to implement them as well.

*Smirks*

I know. I'm bitchy.

Its why people love me.

I was also really fuckin' amused that everyone was blaming him for me and Cam going into labor a few days earlier than expected. Real me concedes... it really was all his fault. ^_^

As for the ending...

I want a fuckin' update.

Now.

So get on it, yeah?

Because I'd really hate to have to take out the chainsaw.

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Oh good god.

Zack is so dead.

So very, very dead.

*Nods*

Seriously. I mean... just... god. How could he be that fucking stupid? Really? I think he needs to take sex ed again. Better yet, let an angry pregnant woman teach it to him. *Nods and raises hand* I volunteer myself for the job.

*Grins*

I love how Matt was all 'I'm not sayin' a word because she'll fly out here no matter what I say'. Oh how right he is too.

Buut yeah.

I loved it.

I can't wait to murder Zack.

And watch his mother kill him too.

Update.

Soon.

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Soo...

I think that it goes without saying that I loved it.

*Nods*

I really did.

It was awesome. And Carson smacked Zack for me!

*Does happy dance*

You know how much I was looking forward to that. Hehe.

And the bit between me and Camille when I was trying to find a ride to my doctor's appointment was awesome too.

Buut yeah.

I loved it.

Matt's ringtone fer me made me laugh.

Mostly because the last thing you'd expect his phone to start playing willingly, is Britney Spears.

Soo...

Update soon.

Yeah?

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I like this story :)

Well...

I think it's safe to say shit has hit the fan in Zack's world. I knew JB was gonna fuck him up... Lol. Not that he didn't deserve it... buut still.

And now Jaime's on tour too. *Shakes head* That should be nice and drama-filled. And on top of that, Celia's jealous but is so busy being in denial that she doesn't even realize it. Though Jimmy's quick to catch on, hehe.

Yess...

I love it when I get to threaten people. And that threat was effin' awesome. I love how nobody even laughed because even without talking to me they knew just how dead serious I was about it. Lol.

Poor Celia though... Zack's kinda really being a jerk. *Nods*

Buut... yeah.

I want to know what happens next...

So...

Hurry and update, yeah?

Yeahh...

*Nods*

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Ahh....

How I loved this chapter.

Really and truly.

It was tons of fun writing the dialogue where I got to yell at Zack... and can I just say... that was very cruel of Matt to get me going on Zack to save himself from it later. And let's face it... we all know that's exactly what he did. He told be something Zack did that he knew would set me off then then let me loose on that Left guitarist so he wouldn't get yelled at later. Lol.

It was actually pretty sneaky, never mind smart, of him, but it was still mean.

I just can't wait to see what happens next...

So hurry up and update this... mmkay.

Mmkays.

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*Squeals*

Well... its about time this got updated.

Or rather anything got updated. Lol.

But seriously. I loved this one. It was radtastic. Fer seriosness.

Poor Matt... being the victim of crazy pregnant woman hormones. He totally doesn't deserve that. Then again... it's just something that he's gonna have to deal with. Besides... he's a victim of my mood swings in a lot of your ficcys anyway. Mostly because you have me knocked up in a vast majority of them. And can I just say... that phone conversation after the crazy pregnant chick freak out... waay super cuute. Almost in a sickening way.

JB and Celia, huh?

Didn't see that one coming. Then again... neither did you. Lol.

Awkward Jimmy... hehe. That made me giggle. I mean really... it was kinda really hilarious.

*Nods*

And poor Zack... someone better tell him about JB and Celia soon so he doesn't go and make an ass out of himself. Then again, it sorta seems as though she's getting on his nerves too... they're gonna start off with one of those 'I fucking love to hate you' relationships, aren't they?

Definitely would make things interesting.

Sooo...

Yeah.

Don't make me wait twelve years for an update, mmkays?

And hurry and update other stuff...

*Nods*

I'll love you forever if you do...

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