Fran! You are actually a legend! When you get all famous and loved for your amazing writing and law skillage! I am gonna be famous too! The girl with the pink hair! love it! love you! ha! B)
I really liked the last chapter! I need to go through and find those changes but I really liked it. It's was kind of unlikely romantic ya know? Like how you'd imagine a scene like that would come off a little more creepy in some cases but because the feeling of understanding and that passion was held mutually through both characters it made it more romantic, just in more of that old fashioned "so what if you just came through my window" kind of way haha if that makes sense... anyway, I loved the new chapter and I can't wait to see where it goes :) Please update again soon!
This is REALLY well written :) You have a talent with mixing vocabulary and description and the story itself seems classic yet original in it's telling. Please update again soon!